I need help with an essay?
I’m supposed to write about what I like best about our school and so far, it seems really bad! Lol.
I wrote,
(School name) has many programs for the students. These include sports teams, student council, and other after school activities. There are also teachers that come up with new ideas to help us learn, such as using the SmartBoard to test our knowledge.
My favorite part about going to school at (School name) is that we’re able to learn and have fun at the same time.
…Sucks, right? Lol, before I got a prize for writing…Anyway uh, yeah. Kinda bad. And don’t blame me cause I’m only in the 7th grade. And before you say I’m so young, just remember, that I’m probably gonna live longer than you. Unless you’re EXTREMELY HEALTHY. So yeah, help plz! (:
Plus, I don’t really like anything about our school. Besides a guy. Lmao. xD
actually I think what you have is pretty good so far!
if you want to make it longer maybe you could focus more on like…the clubs at your school? are you in any of them? whats great about them?
you could mention that you like the people at your school, like maybe your school is the kind of school where everyone knows everyone else?
you could also lengthen it by focusing more on the good education your school provides like….smart boards is a good one….does your school provide after school tutoring? are the teachers helpful?
hope this helps you!
p.s. yes, you’ll probably live longer than me. haha
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